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Dear Zara, Thank you for sharing your writing here! We will give you some feedback on it tomorrow. Have a go at going back and self assessing it. Mrs Aperahama
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Dear Zara,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing here! We will give you some feedback on it tomorrow. Have a go at going back and self assessing it.
Mrs Aperahama
thank you Mrs Aperahama for the commet i was thinking that maybe you could present my writing to the meet tomorrow with the class
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Hi Zara
ReplyDeleteI loved your recount about Easter and use of interesting adjectives and verbs.
Mrs Swider