Thursday, 16 April 2020

3 comments:

  1. Dear Zara,
    Thank you for sharing your writing here! We will give you some feedback on it tomorrow. Have a go at going back and self assessing it.
    Mrs Aperahama

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  2. thank you Mrs Aperahama for the commet i was thinking that maybe you could present my writing to the meet tomorrow with the class
    from zara

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  3. Hi Zara
    I loved your recount about Easter and use of interesting adjectives and verbs.
    Mrs Swider

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