Monday 6 September 2021

Why dogs are better than cats

Hello Bloggers, 

Today I was learning to write a persuasive piece of writing about why dogs are better than cats.

I learned this because it was for an online task. What I had to do for this task was write in a google doc I enjoyed writing my piece of writing. I found it challenging to pick ideas. I want you to comment on anything you liked.
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1 comment:

  1. Jasmine Hickling7 September 2021 at 13:54

    Malo e lelei Zara,

    I really enjoyed reading your persuasive text about 'why dogs are better than cats'. I thought you structured your writing into suitable paragraphs and have some good reasons why dogs are better. Next time you could give some further evidence or facts that support your opinions. Have you ever written a persuasive report about cats vs dogs before?

    Ngā mihi,
    Miss Hickling

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